What’s missing?

With the exception of pieces you know are coming (the Guide to Losing a Player wedding night comes to mind) what moments do you wish I’d written that I haven’t? Be honest, and feel free to answer as much as you’d like.

(There’s a point to this; I promise.)

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  1. on 10 Jul 2011 at 10:45 pmKish

    I really enjoyed Some Little Girls. Although the focus was on Bella’s pregnancy, I’d love to see she and Edward struggling with and/or settling into mother and fatherhood. I think there’s potential there to get further insight into them as a couple and as individuals, Bella especially.

    With FtROD, would it be possible to see an EPOV outtake or two at some point? I’ve always wondered what Edward was thinking at the airport scene as well as some of the flashback scenes during the onset of his relationship with Bella. With Bella being as quirky as she was, their dynamic was always interesting… and surprising in many ways. I often found myself tilting my head at Edward’s unabashed words and behavior specifically. If possible, I’d love to be inside his head a little.

    I hope these aren’t odd requests :)



    Valentina reply:

    Thanks for responding. Would you believe your second request has already been written? It was part of the fandom4saa compilation. I think I get to post it August 1.


    Kish reply:

    @Valentina, I didn’t know that had already been written. I guess I shouln’t be surprised given the popularity of FtROD :) I’ll look out for it when August rolls in. Thank you!


  2. on 11 Jul 2011 at 5:41 amjoanne

    I hope an EPOV of FtROD. I was hoping an EPOV of the entire thing much like Counterpoint being an EPOV of AA5. But that’s too much to ask so actually EPOV of any chapter there. :)


  3. on 11 Jul 2011 at 4:59 pmIreth

    I would really love to read an outtake from Counterpoint/Guide to Losing a player in which Edward is a child and Carlisle and Esme young parents. I think that their interaction with this genius child would be quite interesting.

    Just wanted to add that whatever you write it is and will be amazing :-)


  4. on 12 Jul 2011 at 1:55 amfictor09

    I’d really love to see more of Esme & Carlisle’s relationship as they get to know each other through marriage in guide to losing a player. I like their relationship and unconventional start they’ve had. Plus it’s fun to read about characters that aren’t so over done and not quite what you expect.

    I’ve really enjoyed Some Little Girls. Partly because I still want to hang on to AA5/Cpt E&B, but also because I’m trying to have a kid myself. Selfishly I like reading about people (albeit fictional) going through that journey.


  5. on 12 Jul 2011 at 6:41 pmLily

    I really would like to see more of Some Little Girls after the hospital. More Bonding with Carissa between with both Edward and Bella :)


  6. on 12 Jul 2011 at 10:15 pmolivian00

    ANYTHING aa5/some little girls/counterpoint!
    i love these fics! LOVE. thank you for writing them.


  7. on 12 Jul 2011 at 10:46 pmElizabeth440

    Because I could never get enough Youngward, something short and simple from Some Little Girls in his POV would be amazing. Like the first time he and Bella have sex with the express purpose of conceiving or when he realizes they’re having a girl or when Bella so easily capitulates to him after kicking him out or when he’s reassuring her during her labor that everything will be okay because he will make sure of it.

    I also wouldn’t mind a future one-shot of My Life to Be just to get a glimpse of that Bella and Edward.


  8. on 13 Jul 2011 at 8:47 amsunshinemommy

    More Carlisle from AA5/CP/GtLaP? Doesn’t have to be his POV and he can be a secondary character. I’m not picky :)


  9. on 13 Jul 2011 at 5:48 pmjilburfm

    Anything C&E from AA5 world. Meeting the blue-blood in-laws for the first time, recovering from the loss of their first son, the time they realized they had a boy genius on their hands and the difficulty & joy that must go along with that.

    Esme & Liam action from the AA5 world. Info on whoever Kate married, I’m dying to know if it was Garrett and if Edward had anything to do with them meeting.

    EPOV – the aftermath of Bella leaving him in FtROD. More details and angsty pain on, ” what it would be like to live without you.” I’m curious to know if he reflects on their whole relationship and sees all the times he made her feel “less than” or he’s completely oblivious to how he made her feel all the time.

    um, ANYTHING!! :-)


  10. on 14 Jul 2011 at 8:45 amMary

    I always thought you might write a snippet of a confrontation between Bella and her mom in the AA5 universe. Or perhaps more from Charlie as well? Also, the slutty part of me would like to read about Bella’s encounter with another woman, since she told Edward she’d played for the other team a couple times.

    Oh and anything EPOV from FtRiOD.


  11. on 29 Sep 2011 at 11:04 pmLiza

    I would love, love, love to see a FtROD outtake of that first conversation Edward has with Carlisle. My second choice would be a Bella and baby moment from Some Little Girls. I think it would be nice to see Bella really meeting her baby for the first time once she’s able to hold her. Third choice would be a future shot from My Life to Be. It stopped at a good point, but at the same time it didn’t feel finished to me. I think an epilogue would be nice.

    Whatever you end up doing I know I’ll love it. Your stories rock my socks!