Comments on: Chapter 15

By: Jen

Jen — Sat, 12 Mar 2011 04:36:38 +0000

I love it, so glad they finally got together

By: J Chesney

J Chesney — Fri, 10 Sep 2010 06:37:54 +0000

Great story. I love all of your stories — especially Counterpoint.

By: Lori Vernon/2loveybunnies

Lori Vernon/2loveybunnies — Fri, 30 Jul 2010 06:52:53 +0000

Damn, I would love to have more of this! I read your comment above, but it would be really awesome if you ever felt the need, to add an epilogue or final chapter. In my HEA-addled mind, I’m pretending that they lived happily ever after, had lots of babies, and forgot completely about Rose and Emmett! I know, you can shoot me now!

Great job, going to read the rest of the stories as soon as I get some sleep!

By: TippyL

TippyL — Wed, 17 Mar 2010 16:19:12 +0000

Great story – and genius character development in 15 chapters. You're really very talented, Val. I'm not going to hold it against you that we only get to read Edward and Bella sex at the very end of the story.

By: sleepyvalentina

sleepyvalentina — Sun, 28 Feb 2010 00:56:19 +0000

I didn't want to tie it all up. Readers can decide for themselves if Rose's lie ever comes out, if she ends up with Emmett.

By: FANFICTIONALCOLIC

FANFICTIONALCOLIC — Sat, 27 Feb 2010 18:36:48 +0000

Hey dear you,
This story is coted as complet in FF. Is the chatper 14 the end of the story? I hope you would elaborate in epiloge or OS.
Thanks for your answer.