Comments on: Chapter 33

By: luckyduck0076

luckyduck0076 — Wed, 07 Jul 2010 16:36:52 +0000

So…wow. Bella, I want to call her a bitch, really do. It was cruel of that email. What did she hope to gain out of it? I hope this doesn’t set Edward back in his process of wanting to love Kate. I almost feel like I want to put Edward in a case that lets everything in, except anything dealing with Bella.

By: Aitza Danielle

Aitza Danielle — Sat, 29 May 2010 15:09:07 +0000

I’m loving this story. I was hesitant about reading it because I was sure I’d hate Kate, however, it is the complete opposite. Reading this story from Edward’s point of view is enlightening and very interesting. I do think I would hate Bella had I not read Art After 5 first. Counterpoint is not what I expected at all. I’m loving the interacting with Esme, Carlisle, and Kate. You’ve done a wonderful job.

By: ResaHK

ResaHK — Thu, 04 Mar 2010 01:26:52 +0000

I really hope that he stays with Kate, this is by far the healthiest choice. I don't like Bella and this email just compunds this, it is self obsessed and writen with out any regard to whether Edward has moved on or not.
Love the story, your English is very old world almost Austin-esk.

By: Michelle

Michelle — Mon, 01 Mar 2010 01:54:37 +0000

this is slightly different then the one of fanfiction