Comments on: Epilogue

By: licpa

licpa — Tue, 08 Mar 2011 04:16:42 +0000

I started this story last night and could not stop reading. This is one of my favorite fics that I have read. Your characters are so unique. My heart broke when they broke up but I can see that it was necessary. As Edward said the night of the formal they had to go through that time to get to the healthy relationship. Thank you so much for sharing this story.

By: Koshivuh

Koshivuh — Mon, 28 Feb 2011 05:20:52 +0000

I’m proud to say I found this on my own, even though I know I should’ve looked for a second home for this wonderful work of fiction, instead of asking you to give me all the answers. I loved this. I know, I haven’t left one stinkin’ review throughout this whole adventure, until now. My only – if even valid – excuse, is that I was so taken with and enveloped inside this story, that I couldn’t stop myself from moving on instead of stopping by to give you some nice words, because, really, that’s all they are compared to this…This masterpiece. This has to be, hands down, the best Twilight fanfiction I have ever read in the time that I’ve even known about Twilight. All that’s left to say is that I’m so thankful to you for writing this and I’m so happy I had the chance to read it. I can see myself coming back in months, even years just to read this again and again, and it will never get old, because this story is timeless.

By: Leigh

Leigh — Thu, 17 Feb 2011 08:07:54 +0000

Ok I have been reading various fanfics for years and none have ever made me cry the way yours did. Here I am at 2 am feeling like I’ve been drug through the emotional gauntlet. I just have to say thank you for it! Your story was wonderful. I’m not sure what previous issues you had with people and this story before but I’m so glad that you decided to repost it here for all of us to enjoy. You’re a very gifted writer and I can’t wait to track down some more of your work.

By: Denyse

Denyse — Mon, 31 Jan 2011 02:07:19 +0000

I always feel sad when I’m at the end of my favorite story and I love your story so much. The ending was the best. Thank you for sharing this wonderful story.

By: Janice

Janice — Sun, 30 Jan 2011 17:34:44 +0000

@Jan M,
I am going to have to ditto your remarks. I found myself very judgemental. I almost didn’t want to read the story because Bella was going to be older. What a mistake that would have been. What a journey this has been. After reading everyone’s reply’s I see that AA5 was removed. How fortunate was I that I received a chance to read it. How beautifully it was written and how I thank you for writing it. I also see that Counterpoint is the next place for me. Thank you again

By: Sea4Me

Sea4Me — Fri, 07 Jan 2011 04:46:34 +0000

Siiiiiiiiiigh.

Is this really the end? I’m going to go check out the next chaps & hope to savor your other work slowly.

By: Aimee

Aimee — Thu, 06 Jan 2011 00:09:37 +0000

I am so glad I found this story on your website. By the time I was ready to read it on the fanfiction sites it had be removed. I read Counterpoint and feel in love with all your characters, especially Edward and Carlisle. You wrote a beautiful relationship for the two of them. I have loved reading Art After 5! Thank you so much for sharing.

By: Jan M

Jan M — Fri, 17 Dec 2010 01:43:07 +0000

Geez, this story was absolutely stunning! I hesitated beginning it because I was pre-judging the fact that Bella was having sex with a 17 year old. I read some of your other stories first and saw where this one might be taken off the website and I simply did not want to miss it. It was the best and I am having a hard time finding any flaws in this. It is just a precious story and I am sad to have come to end of the tale. These characters were so alive and real. But I guess now I will go read Counterpoint and see this wonderful tale from Edward’s POV.

This is such a classic that I know it will be one of those that I would like to read again and again. I just hope you keep this up for addicts like me who simply love it so much I just don’t want to let it go.

I will echo some of the other comments– you are a fantastic writer.

By: NKubie

NKubie — Fri, 10 Dec 2010 06:55:31 +0000

What a beautiful ending.

By: Stephanie

Stephanie — Fri, 26 Nov 2010 16:57:05 +0000

I’m so glad I found this story again….it was one of the first stories I read in FF when I discovered the Twilight world….your writing skills are so good and your words so real and raw and sensitive I cannot tell how much I think AA5 is a work of genius…
Thank you for sharing it with us!
xoxo